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Josh Datko's avatar

I think you asked for feedback on the notes. I Like the notes, but not the footnotes. Or maybe just one or 2. This is purely a cosmetic statement -- it just looks too academic to me.

But, feel free to put an encyclopedia under the poem though, I think that's interesting.

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Wil Price's avatar

I appreciate it!

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